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Lost

Lost in hate
Lost in pain

Really what do we have to gain
when love and hope are down the drain?

As anger and fear rue the day with human
feelling in disarray

But how can one truly say in this minute,
this hour, this day, that anger and fear are
the mainstay?

As the lost are truly found
As honest people fall in love
As the spirits of young children
remain as pure and white as a dove

So, my point dear reader is one simple fact,
love and hope are immortal as they continue
to be experianced
A poem arguing, is love and hope are truly dead?
This is intended to be section one of a four subject ballad.
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Il0ve Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2006
This is GREAT!!!!!!! I'm adding thisto faves!!!!!
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slipstreamtactics Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2006
Enjoy! Thanks fr the fav!
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Il0ve Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2006
It's k!!!
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gungriffon-geona Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2006
I can attest to that, suprisingly enough. I've got a friend who's girlfriend and him startle me at how deep their love is.
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slipstreamtactics Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2006
Hopefully they have that love for the long haul, I wish them luck.
Personally, I was kinda refering to my cousin and her boyfriend.
Thank you for the comment, my friend.
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